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1、(完整word)雅思大作文修改Government should spend money on the railway rather than the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?As the time goes by went onWe are talking about a present state., the quality of life is rapidly rising and has brought about a massive influence in the dive
2、rsity of the society has changed a lot and the quality of our daily life is rising rapidly。 paraphraseTransportation is one of the key points of improvement in every society. In this regard, some people argue that the government should spend money on the railway rather than the roads. I, as an advoc
3、ate of change, totally agree with this cannot agree with that please check your previous sentence. This phrase actually means that you are against railway improvement. BE CAREFUL. This is very important.idea. any more。 Poor choice of word. irrelevantThere are some reasons as followed。unnecessaryTo b
4、egin with, railways can itBe specific for this is already a new paragraph. reduced the pollution since an increasing rephraseif a number of people would give up driving to work and turn opt to ride a train. Nowadays, people spend a great amounts ofrephrase ample time on the road especially during th
5、e rush hours。 At the same time, In addition, the emission of cars brings a great be careful with grammar. Rpelling increase contribution to an already polluted amount of pollution in our paraphraseenvironment. It also adds on to the daily stress of people because they tend to be upset easily if they
6、 got into a paraphrase pleasedue to the traffic jam for a long time。 Researches have also shown that when cars are immobile stoppedchoose a better synonym, more air pollution is produced would be madechoose a synonym。 These problems can be avoided if railways will be the focus of transportation deve
7、lopment. is really a good way to solve this problemparaphrase。Whats more, it solves the congestion on the road as many people were commuted by train。 Recent years, the number of the cars running on the road is increasing in a high speed, as a result, a question is given to us that a lot of cars are
8、over volumed, so that the traffic jam has become a horrible problem. However, the train would take most of the people to their destination without waiting on the road.This paragraph basically just repeated you idea in your previous paragraph. Avoid being redundant.In addition, railways are not only
9、a medium of transportation for people, but also for goods and commodities. Using the railway transport, in my opinion, is better in delivering products。 This method is efficient and timesaving because it avoids the congestion of road traffic as it has its own pathways。 Therefore, if railways will un
10、dergo tremendous upgrade, then, businesses in ones country will improve enormously, resulting to a remarkable reform in the societys economy. Finally, on the view of the economy, taking public transportation is much cheaper than private cars, in this way, people could do much more other things they
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