初中英语B卷书面表达.doc

个人收集整理 勿做商业用途63目前中学生学习任务重，压力大.而丰富多彩的业余生活，有利于开拓视野,调节身心，提高学习效率。请结合下面的提示词，以My Spare Time为题写一篇80词左右的短文,谈谈你的业余生活。看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、参加社会活动等。你喜欢做什么?你是如何合理安排的呢？说说你的想法和理由。提示词语：busy, play， healthy, knowledge， housework, relax，volunteer, colorful要求：1。 短文内容应包括以上提示的内容,可适当发挥。2. 书写工整，句式规范,条理清楚。有表达自己观点的句子。3. 不得出现真实的姓名和地名。 My Spare Time【答案】One possible version:My Spare TimeI am a middle school student. Though Im busy with my lessons， my spare time is still colorful。 After school I usually play sports. I like basketball and football very much。 Sports help me to keep healthy and study better。 I often do some reading in the evening。 I think books are our best friends。 They give us much knowledge that we cant learn at school. So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet. I find its a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world. At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework。 I clean the house， wash clothes and learn to cook。 During the summer or winter vacation， I have enough time to do things like volunteering。 I help those people who are in need. Its a good experience for me. I enjoy myself in my spare time。个人收集整理，勿做商业用途 【解析】一、审题本篇作文考查体裁为说明文，要求写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你的业余生活。二、列举写作要点1。 业余生活丰富多彩。2。 你喜欢做什么？你是如何合理安排的呢？说说你的想法和理由。课后：做运动、看书、看电视、玩电脑。（有利于开拓视野，调节身心，提高学习效率。)周末：做家务(帮助父母,锻炼自己)假期:参加社会活动等。(积累经验）3。 业余生活过得愉快。三、列出重点短语及句型be busy with， after school, play sports， keep healthy, do some reading, in the evening, at school, watch TV， relax oneself, at the same time, open up, help with， in need, enjoy oneself, in my spare time, have time to do sth。， 64学校英语角将于本周末举行以 “How to relax ourselves after the exam” 为主题的讨论会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿.内容包括以下要点：1。 去旅游,亲近大自然；2. 参加娱乐活动，比如：听音乐、看电影；3. 进行体育锻炼；4. 你的建议。注意：1. 词数：80100,不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称.How to relax ourselves after the exam 【答案】One possible version： How to relax ourselves after the examIt is necessary to relax ourselves after the exam. Therere kinds of activities for us to take part in。 First of all we can travel around to get closer to nature and this can broaden our mind as well as enriching our life. We can also go to the movie or listen to music. Whats more， joining in a sports club is a good choice， which can keep us healthy。 For example， playing a football game in the afternoon may relax ourselves. Above all， we should arrange our time reasonably and live a regular life。 I hope all of us can have a wonderful time。个人收集整理，勿做商业用途【解析】一、审题本篇作文考查体裁为说明文,要求写一篇发言稿,介绍一下考试之后如何放松。二、列举写作要点1。 去旅游，亲近大自然;2. 参加娱乐活动，比如：听音乐、看电影；3。 进行体育锻炼;4. 你的建议.三、列出重点短语及句型It is necessary to, relax oneself, kinds of， take part in， first of all， as well as, go to the movie， listen to music, whats more， join in, for example, above all， all of us, have a wonderful time65假如上周日你参加了长江社区的Yard Sale活动。请给你们学校校刊上的English Club栏目写一篇关于此次活动的介绍.要点如下：1有200多人参加了此次活动；2有的人出售旧物如：衣服、玩具、自行车等；3有的人出售自制的蛋糕、卡片、书签等；4还有的人交换旧书；5请写一至两点你对此次活动的看法。注意：1词数6080 ，文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数；2文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。不要逐条翻译。参考词汇：Changjiang Community n 。长江社区 exchange v。 交换 used adj旧的【答案】It was fine last Sunday. I went to the Yard Sale in Changjiang Community。 More than 200 people took tark in the activity 。Some people sold used things such as bikes, toys, and clothes。 Others sold cakes, cards and bookmarks made by themselves. Used books could be exchanged in the yard， too. I enjoyed myself there. In my opinion, it was a very good activity. We can not only make full use of used things， but also protect our environment in this way。【解析】作者根据题目要点提示，对Yard Sale情况进行了描述最后谈了自己的看法.整篇文章行文流畅,能较好地运用所学短语和句型来表达自己的意思，语句通顺，语法运用得当。 66根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信 Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result。 What do you think？ Try to offer her some advice。 （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑.请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。）（注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分.）【答案】（范文摘自网络，范文分析出自本人）More and more people like shopping（like doing sth) in supermarkets， which（定语从句） have developed rapidly in recent years. This， of course， has something to do with the convenience they offer to customers。Firstly， prices in supermarkets are much lower, for they are run in the self-service style， therefore, fewer shop assistants are needed. Secondly, a wide variety of goods are displayed to satisfy the needs of different people. Thirdly， supermarkets usually have longer opening hours than other shops and stores.Shopping in supermarkets can make customers feel confident, comfortable and relaxed。 Moreover, it saves them both time and money。Thats why supermarkets are getting more and more crowded nowadays.【解析】这类作文属于开放型作文，学生可以充分发挥自己的想象力，自由表达自己的想法，考生可以发挥自己的英语水平，区分度明显，成绩好的学生可以写出高级句型，显示自己的英语水平，如果成绩不好的学生，过多使用普通句式，文章就显得dry。作文点评：文章的层次分明，逻辑感强，Firstly,Secondly， Thirdly，等使人觉得文章很通畅，这是现在非常欠缺的。此外，短语，例如has something to do with，offer to，both and等都用得非常好，还有定语从句，名词性从句，是一遍值得学习的范文，考生应该在平时多积累这些文章。 67假如你叫李华，请你就“英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学”这一问题，根据下面的提示和要求,给你的老师Miss Li写一封信,谈一谈你的看法。提示:(1）Whats your idea?(2） Why do you think so?（3) What is your advice？要求：（1）信须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。(2） 信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.（3) 词数：6080。Dear Miss Li，I think youd better use _ Hopefully you can think about it. Best wishes! Yours， Li Hus【答案】Possible versionsDear Miss Li， I think youd better use English in class。 When you speak English, well have a good chance to improve our listening skills. It is also helpful for our reading, speaking and writing. We can copy what you say all the time. The more chances we have， the more progress we will make！ So I hope you can teach in English. But please use simple English as much as possible and speak clearly and slowly。 This way， we can learn English better and better.Hopefully you can think about it.Best wishes！ Yours， Li HuaDear Miss Li， I think youd better use both English and Chinese。 The best way to learn English is to use it. When you teach in English， its good for our listening。 At the same time it is helpful to improve our speaking, reading and writing. However， if you only use English, we cant follow you sometimes， especially when you explain grammar rules and language points. So my advice is Use English when possible and use Chinese when necessary。 This way, we can learn English better.Hopefully you can think about it.Best wishes! Yours， Li Hua【解析】考查应用文的书写，书信的格式已给出，关键要把握几个要点：1. your idea. 首选要阐明自己的观点，用英语,还是双语。2. your reason 然后进一步说明这样做的好处。例如：如果用英语，学生便能有更多的机会提高英语能力等等。内容要具体,可适当发挥。3。your advise.恳切提出与上面观点一致的具体做法，希望老师采纳,表达自己及同学们的愿望。68暑期英语学习交流中心将举行感恩活动, 要求用英语介绍你的至亲, 恩师，好友或学校。请你根据以下内容要点， 介绍你可亲可爱的妈妈。内容及要点:1、年龄， 外貌（自由发挥，）。2、个性品质（参考词汇： kind, friendly， wise, patient（耐心的）, honest, chatter唠叨about every little thing, get on well with)3、互 动（参考句型: I help my mom toshe wont get angry if I she is happy if I）（参考词汇： do housework， fail in a exam, make a mistake， encourage）4、感情表达(参考句型： I love and I give her she works so hard that I 要求： （参考词汇：wash feet; flower； a hug(拥抱)1、文章必须涵盖所有内容要点，参考词汇可以选择运用。2、此题具有开放性,考生可以围绕提示的语言要点适当发挥,力求言之成句.3、力求阐述内容要点，词数80词左右。4、文中不要提及你真实的校名和人名。开头， 结尾己给出, 不计入总词汇。My mom is I love my mom and Im sure she is the best mom in the word.My mom is about X years old. She is tall with white hair。 She is a housewife. She is really a nice and kind mother.【答案】My mom is friendly, wise and patient. She teaches me how to be a man and how to study. She will be very happy if I study hard。 However, she wont get angry if I dont do anything too perfectly. instead， she encourages me to do better next time。 When I am in a bad mood， she always cheers me up.I love my mom very much ，so I give her a big hug when I get home from school. My mom works so hard that I wash feet for her every evening of weekends. I love my mom and Im sure she is the best mom in the word .【解析】本文是一篇介绍人物的文章，作者用第三人称详细的介绍了自己妈妈的年龄、 外貌、个性品质以及与妈妈平时的活动的互动等.字里行间都流露出对妈妈的喜爱与尊敬之情,整篇文章语言应用准确，交代有条理，意思表达清楚,是一篇较好的作文。69假如你叫李华，市第三中学初三的学生。星期天你和班里的同学去康乐敬老院（old folks home） 参加了社区活动.请根据下面的图画的提示词语，用英语写一篇100词左右的日记。可合理想象,适当发挥。句首已给出，不计入总词数。【答案】Sunday FineToday， we took the school bus to Kang Le old folks home. The old people greeted us warmly and they were very pleased to see us。 We helped them do a lot of things in the old folks home。 We swept the floor for them， we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the desk。 Some girls danced for them and we enjoyed ourselves that day. Finally, we had lunch together with the old people and the dishes were very delicious。As the students in Grade Nine in No.3 Middle School, we like the activity very much. And I think its our duty to help the old people, do you think so？【解析】（一）审题本篇作文考查的为记叙文。要求利用所给的信息列举在星期天去往敬老院的经过。然后写出你个人的观点.（二）列举写作要点1. 乘坐的交通工具，去往敬老院.老人见到我们的心情。2. 在敬老院，我们为老人做的事情。我们的感受。3。 总结：作为学生我们很喜欢参加社区活动。帮助老人是我们的职责。（三）列举重点短语和句型重点短语:take the school bus, help sb。 do sth。, sweep the floor, clean the windows, clean the desk, enjoy oneself , have lunch重点句型：We swept the floor for them， we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the desk。And I think its our duty to help the old people.【评分标准】第一档（1315分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（1012分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量错误，但不影响意思表达.第三档（79分）能传递部分信息，表达不够流畅，但句子基本可读。第四档（46分)只能传递少量信息，表达不通顺，只有少量句子可读。第五档(13分)只能传递个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读. 70中考马上要结束了，考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是David，你的美国笔友Fred来信询问考后你想做什么.请给他写封回信,告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情，并说明理由。注意:1. 60词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2。文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息；3.不要把已给出部分再抄写在答题卡上.Dear Fred,I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it._