高考英语短文改错练习题及答案.doc

(一)
Last week my parents and I took a two-days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan.
As everyone knows, it’s famous  mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.
The weather was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of  the mountain.
The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain,
we fed monkeys, visiting temples  and told stories. On the way up I was busy
taking picture  since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly. 
Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain.
The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep
at the moment my head touched the pillow.
（二）
Many teachers worry about the effects of television with young people.
According to studies, many children spend more time watching television
than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not
be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries    
much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be
very noise. Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials.
On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all      
planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.       
            （三）
   I’m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players
we’ve won several games. There will an important game next month.
But one of the best player in our team told me just then that he wouldn’t
play basketball once more. His parents asked him to spend in more time
preparing for the  college entrance examination. I feel sorry to him.    
But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports
and college was the only place for a smart boy like his son. So my friend had
no choice. He wanted to make their parents happy.   
   (四)
When I first learned to write English, I ran into many difficulties .
The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and
tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me
to keep my diary. I followed her advice and should put down 100
words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper
as I was learning to express me in simple English .One day I wrote   
a little story and showed to my teacher .She liked it very much and
reads it to the class .All said the story was a good one. Their word
were a great encouragement to me. 
（五）
Dear Ralph,
I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as
shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me
to do things as well them. I'm sure they will laugh to me and see me as         
a fool. So I feel happy every day. Besides, I have few friends.
I don't know that they don't like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked
to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at     
once. I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t  
seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do?      
   Yours,
    Xiao Wei
（六）
  On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to do over a weekend.
I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum
and some parks. But I have spent lot my money, so I cannot even go
out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes, a concert can be very excited.
You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concert
cost so much. I may just listen to music, I have some records giving to me
as birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records, there are no need to spend money.
All right. That’s how I' m going to do.
（七）
Dear Susan,
I’m very glad to hear about you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately,
I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon.
You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every
30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class will
be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to
a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekend
over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.
Yours,
Zhang Ming
(八)
      You can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the Internet.
It’s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books.
Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.    
They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person
Informations for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all  
information are good to society. For example, you can find such information
like how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future.
（九）
Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a  hobby which
is both interested and fun. And every year more and more people start
a stamp collection of your own and discover an interest which can
even last lifetime . Starting your collection of stamps are easy because
they are nowhere. Holiday and birthday postcards from relatives and letters 
from friends can all provide you for stamps from all over the world. So once
you’ve started collecting seriously, you will probably want to join in the
Stamp Collectors’Club which exist to add more stamps to your collection.     

（十）
Though a great progress has been made in science these years, there  
are still many people live in poor conditions. They make their lives  
by collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to school
because they have not enough money to send their children to there.   
Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?       
The answer lies on the population explosion. A president                  
of a developing country once said; “It is us who are to blame for   
the poverty because we used to ‘produce’ child without limit.”     
Although this few words sound simple enough, they have           
clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.          

（1）第一行：two-days 改为two-day 第二行：mountain 前加a
第三行：noon后加when 第四行：them改为us
第五行：visiting 改为visited 第六行：pictures；passed
第七行：去down 第八行：and改为but 第九行：去at
（2）第一行：with改为on 第二行：many改为some 第三行：because of
第四行：删去 be；read改为reading 第五行：programs第六行：noisy
第七行：On改为In 第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really
(3) 第一行：so改为and　第二行：will后加be　
第三行：player 改为players；then改为now　 第四行：once改为any；删去in　
第五行：to改为for　 第六行：go改为going； 第七行：was改为is　
第八行：their改为his
(4) 第一行：write后加in 第二行：去掉第一个in 第三行：anything改为everything
第四行：my改为a；去掉should 第五行：talk改为talking 第六行：me改为myself
第七行：showed 后加it 第八行：reads改为read；word改为words
(5) 第一行：of改为from  第二行：quietly改为quiet  第三行：well 后加as；to改为at 
第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad 第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk 
第六行：stranger改为strangers   第七行：since改为but  第八行：去掉about
(6) 第一行：划掉myself ；a 改为the    第二行：visit 改为visiting 第三行：my前加of  
第四行：excited 改为exciting 第五行：So改为But               
第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given 第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what
（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the 第二行：although改为because / as
第三行：find 后加it 第四行：minute 改为minutes；rightly 改为right
第五行：or 改为and ；去掉together； 第六行：with 改为about
第七行：Having 改为Have
（8）第一行：kinds 改为kinds of ；minute改为minutes  第二行：have改为having 
第三行：去掉even 第四行：They改为There ；person改为personal 
第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy
第六行：are改为is  第七行：what改为how
（9）第一行：age改为ages  第二行：interested改为interesting
第三行：your改为their；what改为which/that
第四行：lifetime前加a；are改为 is 第五行：nowhere改为everywhere
第六行：for改为with；So改为But 第七行：去掉in 
第八行：exist改为exists 
（10）第一行：去掉a 第二行：live改为living   第三行：thing改为things  
第四行：去掉第二个to  第五行：在you前加do  第六行：on改为in 
第七行：us改为we    第八行：child改为children   第九行：tthis----these  
第十行：clear改为clearly