作文高级句式(好可用)p.ppt

.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.our journey was comfortable.We all think he is a great man.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.Thanks to the good weather,think highly of him A good idea occurred to me.A good idea suddenly struck me.一一.学会使用高级词汇学会使用高级词汇.The students there neednt pay for their books.As a result the plan was a failure.When she heard he had died,she went pale with sorrow.she went pale with sorrow.She went to Austria in order to study music.She went to AustriaBooks are free for the students there.The plan turned out(to be)a failure.At the news of his death,for/with the purpose of studying music.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.In our school,there are twentysix classrooms.You can find my house easily.The more he spoke,the more excited he feel Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms Twentysix classrooms make up our school.Youll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house.二二.学会使用丰富的句式学会使用丰富的句式 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.（使用（使用V-ing形式）形式）To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）（使用名词性从句）Onhisarriving/arrival,pleasegivemeane-mail.Onhisarriving/arrival,pleasegivemeane-mail.WhatsurpriseshimisthatWhatsurpriseshimisthat ThatthelittlergirlknowssomanythingssurprisesThatthelittlergirlknowssomanythingssurpriseshim.him.ItsurpriseshimthatthelittlergirlknowssoItsurpriseshimthatthelittlergirlknowssomanythings.manythings.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句使用倒装句使用倒装句使用倒装句)HedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadHedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(readthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型使用强调句型使用强调句型使用强调句型.It.Itwaswas.notuntil).notuntil)WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.WeakasIam,Illmaketheeffort.ItwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsintheItwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadnewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.happened.NotuntilhehadreadthenewsintheNotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperdidheknowwhathadnewspaperdidheknowwhathadhappened.happened.I passed the physics exam because of your help.（使用虚拟语气）（使用虚拟语气）She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(用过去分词用过去分词)They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用使用V-ing形式形式)IcouldnothavepassedthephysicsexambutIcouldnothavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.foryourhelp.Ifyouhadnothelpedme,IcouldnothavepassedIfyouhadnothelpedme,Icouldnothavepassedthephysicsexam.thephysicsexam.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutoftheFollowedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.lab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.I wont believe what he says.（使用状语从句）（使用状语从句）If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（使用并列句）（使用并列句）He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)Nomatterwhathesays,Iwontbelieve.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwontbelieve.Studyhardandyoullmakerapidprogress.Studyhardandyoullmakerapidprogress.NosoonerhadhecomebackNosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.abroad.三三.学会使用恰当的连接词学会使用恰当的连接词 使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有使用恰当连接词，对写出一篇有“英语味英语味英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很的文章很的文章很重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有重要，能使整篇文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章有一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。下面一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。下面一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。下面一定的流畅性，以使文章层次清晰，行文连贯。下面表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词。表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词。表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词。表格中是写作中经常用到的一些连接词。逻辑角度逻辑角度时间顺序时间顺序空间顺序空间顺序合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇first,second,then,finally/at last,first,second,then,finally/at last,immediately,suddenly,soon immediately,suddenly,soon here,there,on one sideon the here,there,on one sideon the other side,in front of,at the back other side,in front of,at the back of,next toof,next to.逻辑角度逻辑角度对称顺序对称顺序转折顺序转折顺序因果顺序因果顺序条件顺序条件顺序让步顺序让步顺序合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇for one thing,_,for one thing,_,on one hand,_ on one hand,_ for another thingfor another thingon the other handon the other handbut,however,while,though,otherwise but,however,while,though,otherwise because,since,as,thanks to,as a result(of)because,since,as,thanks to,as a result(of)as long as,on condition that,if,unless as long as,on condition that,if,unless though,as,even if/though,whether,though,as,even if/though,whether,who(what,when,where)-ever who(what,when,where)-ever.逻辑角度逻辑角度递进顺序递进顺序插入语过度插入语过度合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇whats more,besides,to make the whats more,besides,to make the matter worse,whats worse matter worse,whats worse I think,Im afraid,you know,as we all I think,Im afraid,you know,as we all know,as far as I knowknow,as far as I know.丰富的句式：丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.What a kind boyheis!How disappointedhewas!感叹句感叹句强调句强调句e.g.It was this young boy that helped the old granny.I do hope you can come if possible.e.g.Only in this way can yousolvethisproblem.There comes the police car.Hardly hadtheygottothestationwhen theymettheyoungman.e.g.They read while walking or riding on a bus.Come to me if necessary.e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.倒装句倒装句省略句省略句with短语短语.e.g.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewhere we canfind much useful information.Letscometothemainteaching building,at the back of which stands the school library.定语从句定语从句e.g.Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.各种名词性从句各种名词性从句.e.g.Timepassedquicklybefore we knew it.The moment we reached the farm,wegotdowntoharvesting.So long as we work harder at our lessons,wellcatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句各种状语从句.1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughImweak,Illmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is thatthe little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.5.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwontbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.（祈使句+and）Followed by many students,she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)10.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of)11.As a result the plan was a failure.(turn out)12.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(the morethe more)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.We all think highly of him.The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.Summary:A good essay is usually made up of a topic paragraph,some supporting paragraphs and a concluding paragraph.A good paragraph is one that consists of a topic sentence and supporting sentences.A good paragraph is one that contains proper linking words.A good paragraph is one with advanced vocabulary and varied sentence patterns.Lets improve it:.正如俗语所说，事物都有两面性。正如俗语所说，事物都有两面性。As a popular saying goes,Every coin has two sides.众所周知，一份耕耘一份收获。众所周知，一份耕耘一份收获。As is known to all,No pains,no gains.有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。Where there is a will,there is a way.行动胜于任何语言。行动胜于任何语言。Actions speak louder than words.条条道路通罗马。条条道路通罗马。All roads lead to Rome.最大的敌人就是自己。最大的敌人就是自己。Every man is his own worst enemy.患难之交才是真正的朋友。患难之交才是真正的朋友。A friend in need is a friend indeed.欲速则不达。欲速则不达。Haste makes waste.机不可失，时不再来机不可失，时不再来 Time and tide wait for no man./Take time while time is,for time will be away.孰能生巧。孰能生巧。Practice makes perfect.1.我们必须铭记除了努力工作，成功没有秘我们必须铭记除了努力工作，成功没有秘诀。诀。It must be kept in mind that there is no secret of success but hard work.2.我们从这件事可以看到在这世上没有什我们从这件事可以看到在这世上没有什么困难是我们无法克服的。么困难是我们无法克服的。It can be seen from this that there is no difficulty in the world we cant overcome.3.只有当我们用知识武装自己时，我们才能只有当我们用知识武装自己时，我们才能在这个世界上立于不败之地。在这个世界上立于不败之地。Only when we are armed with enough knowledge can we stand out in the world.4.毫无疑问，如果你用心了，你就一定能够毫无疑问，如果你用心了，你就一定能够达成目标。达成目标。There is no doubt that you are sure to achieve your goals if you put your heart into it.5.老实说，我们犯的错误本来都是可以避免的。老实说，我们犯的错误本来都是可以避免的。To tell the truth,many mistakes we made could have been avoided.6.我们该意识到学习的重要性了。我们该意识到学习的重要性了。Its high time that we should be aware of the importance of study.7 对于一个下定决心做一件事的人，世界上没有什对于一个下定决心做一件事的人，世界上没有什么能难倒他。么能难倒他。As the saying goes,nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.8.它让我想起我自己的经历。它让我想起我自己的经历。It reminds me of my own experience.9.据我所知，写这本书花了他超过一年的时据我所知，写这本书花了他超过一年的时间间 As far as I know,it took him more than a year to write the book.10.老实说，无论你喜不喜欢它，你没有其老实说，无论你喜不喜欢它，你没有其他选择。他选择。To be frank,whether you like it or not,you have no other choice.11.我们浪费不起时间。我们浪费不起时间。We cant afford to waste time.12.无论英语有多难学，你都必须尽力学好无论英语有多难学，你都必须尽力学好它。它。No matter how difficult English may be,you should do your best to learn it.13.我想当然地认为父母应该为我们做好一切，我想当然地认为父母应该为我们做好一切，其实这是错误的。其实这是错误的。I take it for granted that parents should do everything for us,which is wrong.14.只要我们坚持，我们一定会成功。只要我们坚持，我们一定会成功。We will be successful as long as we hold on to the end.15.在某种意义上来讲，一个成功的人永不在某种意义上来讲，一个成功的人永不满足自己所取得的成就。满足自己所取得的成就。In a certain sense,a successful man is never satisfied with what he has achieved.16.俗话说，活到老，学到老。俗话说，活到老，学到老。As the saying goes,it is never too old to learn.17.显然我们还有很长的路要走。显然我们还有很长的路要走。It is certain that we have a long way to go.18.不可否认不可否认,英语好将有助于增加我们的就英语好将有助于增加我们的就业机会。业机会。There is no denying that a good knowledge of English will improve the chance of our employment.19.听到这个意外的消息，他如此地惊讶以听到这个意外的消息，他如此地惊讶以致说不出一句话来。致说不出一句话来。Hearing the unexpected news,he was so surprised that he couldnt say a word.20 最近，学生会就男女生之间在智力上是否存在最近，学生会就男女生之间在智力上是否存在很大差异对高三很大差异对高三100名学生做了一次调查。名学生做了一次调查。35%被调查的学生认为被调查的学生认为 Recently,the Students Union made a survey about whether there is much difference between girls and boys in IQ among 100 senior 3 students.35%of the surveyed students hold the view that.