人教版初中英语中考作文复习.ppt

宜山一中宜山一中 周小珠周小珠Glad to see you,everybody!-The ways to improve your writing-The ways to improve your writingactivitiesactivitiessubjectssubjectsclassmatesclassmatesteachersteachersbusy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantasticbusy/interesting/wonderful/colorful/fantasticboring/terrible/so-soboring/terrible/so-soTalk about your school lifeTalk about your school lifePair work:Pair work:What do you usually doWhat do you usually do?What do you think ofWhat do you think of?What/Who is your favoriteWhat/Who is your favorite?How are you getting on withHow are you getting on with?Do youDo you?扩写练习：扩写练习：likes playing sportslikes playing sports healthy healthyhealthyhealthyHe is a boy.He is a boy.He is a _ boy.He is a _ boy.He is a _ boy who_.He is a _ boy who_.I like music.I like music.I like_ music.I like_ music.I like_ music that_.I like_ music that_.dancedancedancedancecan make me excitedcan make me excited仿写练习：仿写练习：目的目的原因原因She always_ to _ She always_ to _ because_.because_.relaxrelaxlistens to some musiclistens to some musicmusic is fantasticmusic is fantasticrelaxrelaxstudy betterstudy betterget some knowledgeget some knowledgekeep healthykeep healthyhave a resthave a resthave funhave funget good gradesget good gradesMiss CoolMiss CoolMr.BallMr.Ball仿写练习：仿写练习：It is _for_ to _.It is _for_ to _.necessarynecessaryhimhimdifficult/easy/exciting/interesting/scaring/strangedifficult/easy/exciting/interesting/scaring/strangedangerous/difficult/wonderful/possibledangerous/difficult/wonderful/possibleimpossible/unbelievable/unexpectedimpossible/unbelievable/unexpectedIt is _ for children to play in the street.It is _ for children to play in the street.read booksread booksdangerousdangerousI always_ to _ I always_ to _ because_.because_.It is _ for_ to _.It is _ for_ to _.who/that 引导的定语从句。引导的定语从句。Use these sentence patterns(句型句型)to describe（描述）（描述）your school life.Group work:Group work:activitiesactivitiessubjectssubjectsclassmatesclassmatesteachersteachersI am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it.It is necessary for me to do some housework,weak in it.It is necessary for me to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.找出用所学句型写的好句。找出用所学句型写的好句。Choose good words and sentences to improve your writing strategystrategyCompare:Compare:B is better than A in B is better than A in 08省考试说明范文省考试说明范文How glad I am!I can do many things of my own.I am going How glad I am!I can do many things of my own.I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will also do to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will also do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it.Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework,in it.Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.Isnsuch as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.Isn t my plan t my plan nice?nice?beginningkey sentencelinking words连词连词ending I am I am going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will going to have a trip to the West Lake with my friend.I will do some studies to improve my math because I am a little do some studies to improve my math because I am a little weak in it.It is necessary for me to do some weak in it.It is necessary for me to do some housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.housework,such as cooking breakfast and cleaning rooms.fluency流畅流畅 consecution条理条理 My hobbies My hobbies (Beginning):_.(Beginning):_.(Key sentence A):(Key sentence A):_._.I often read in my I often read in my free time.I read many kinds of books.And I like the stories that free time.I read many kinds of books.And I like the stories that have good endings.have good endings.(Key sentence B):_.I like all kinds of (Key sentence B):_.I like all kinds of music.I often listen to the music programs on radio.Although I music.I often listen to the music programs on radio.Although I cancan t sing English songs well,I like them a lot.t sing English songs well,I like them a lot.(Key sentence C):_.I often play ping-(Key sentence C):_.I often play ping-pong after classes.When I am doing sports,I forge all my trouble pong after classes.When I am doing sports,I forge all my trouble and worry.Of course it is necessary for students to play sports.and worry.Of course it is necessary for students to play sports.(Ending)_.(Ending)_.Can you add a beginning,two other key Can you add a beginning,two other key sentences,some linking words and an ending?sentences,some linking words and an ending?Practice:Practice:I am a lover of readingI am a lover of readingTitle:_ Title:_ totototogeneral总总specific分分specific分分general总总I have a lot of hobbies and enjoy doing many I have a lot of hobbies and enjoy doing many things in my free time.things in my free time.I am a lover of reading.I am a lover of reading.I am also a music lover.I am also a music lover.I like sports as well.I like sports as well.In short,I enjoy my life in school.Reading books,In short,I enjoy my life in school.Reading books,listening to music and doing sports are very listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.helpful to my health and my studies.My hobbiesMy hobbiesBeginning:Beginning:Key sentence B:Key sentence B:Key sentence A:Key sentence A:Ending:Ending:Main part(正文正文):Key sentence C:Key sentence C:(linking words)Make an outline for the following composition:三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自三年的初中生活马上就要结束了，记下你的校园生活。题目自拟拟(80词左右词左右)（2007衢州卷衢州卷)Title:_ Beginning:Key sentence B:Key sentence A:Ending:Main part(正文正文):Use outline提纲提纲 to improve your writing strategystrategyoutline提纲提纲Title:_ Beginning:Key sentence 2:Key sentence 1:Ending:Main part(正文正文):According to your own outline,use some good words and sentences to finish your composition.Writing Writing I alwaysI alwaystoto because becauseIt is It is for for to to who/that 引导的定语从句。引导的定语从句。评价评价:请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。请对照下面这个表格评价同桌的作文。1.fluency流畅流畅 consecution条理条理:(Yes or No)Beginning()key sentences()linking word()ending ()Choice of words and sentences:The number of spelling mistakes ()The number of grammar mistakes()Does he write good words or sentence?()3.Others:_ A(13-15 分分):包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚包含内容要点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚B(11-12 分分):基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基基本包含内容要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚本清楚C(8-10分分 ):内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意内容包含部分要点，语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意D(6-7分分 ):要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达要点不明确，语言错误多，影响意思表达E(3-5 ):只抄了提只抄了提示词，错误百出，不知所云示词，错误百出，不知所云F(0-2分分):白卷或文不对题白卷或文不对题作者：作者：_得分：得分：_ 评价人评价人:_How to improve your writingHow to improve your writingTips:Tips:1.Make an outline.1.Make an outline.2.Choose good words and sentences.2.Choose good words and sentences.Homework:我市英我市英语教学网开教学网开设了了“中学生中学生论坛”，请你你结合自己的初中生活和真合自己的初中生活和真实感受，以感受，以AgoodAgoodteacherinmyeyesteacherinmyeyes为题写一篇写一篇8080词左右的短左右的短文。文。(Youshouldmakeanoutlinefirst)(Youshouldmakeanoutlinefirst)